PLANNING: Pitch Feedback

For our pitch we got some very good feedback that really id help us a lot. Micky helped us a lot as well as Marissa when they told us what we could do to improve our final idea. Micky told us that we should Make the opening more about the girl rather than about the woman. We thought that was a good idea but because of the way the opening was planned we were not 100% sure if we could do that. Marissa asked many questions  about what would happen further on in the video to see if it made sense to have an opening like the one we were choosing. In the end they liked the idea and said that it was good. The critisisms they gave us helped us and we did end up making a few changes in the plot to incorporate the feedback they had given us into the video.