PITCH Feedback

We showed our Final thriller pitch to our classmates and teachers. From that we gathered some information that would allow us to explore and develop possibly a better thriller. Overall the feedback we got was very good, we had a strong pitch a a well though out idea that showed understanding of all our research. We also got some possible ideas to add or create a better effect on the audience. We had originally planned to do a narrative opening with a chronological view, but then from the feedback we were given an idea from a member of staff that we should intertwine the two seperate characters. So instead of following the main characters path, we would show small clips that would allow the audience to question what was happening. We will take this into account while filming our scenes and then see what scenes work best where while editing.